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Effective Storytelling - Shared screen with speaker view
Zack
12:42
percy Jackson a
Annie Yang
12:50
yes
Simra
12:58
Bridge to teribithia
Omkar Naluvala
13:43
wings of fire
Simra
15:30
Percy Jackson is also a series of books
Leo Huang
15:36
yes
Omkar Naluvala
15:38
yeah
Leo Huang
16:52
yes
Omkar Naluvala
18:06
keep singing please. :D
Simra
18:23
the guy whose name I forget
Omkar Naluvala
19:28
she might die!
Omkar Naluvala
19:32
D:
Simra
20:19
yes
Leo Huang
20:40
oop-
Omkar Naluvala
21:06
awkward silence
Omkar Naluvala
21:17
ummmmmmmmmm
Leo Huang
21:23
lol?
Leo Huang
21:54
Christmas is in 6 days! woo
Simra
22:02
Sooo whats everyones favorite food
Simra
22:11
I like bbq chicken pizza
Zack
22:14
SAME
Sarah - MADI
22:19
YES
Leo Huang
22:28
pepperoni pizza
Omkar Naluvala
22:29
my sisters b-day is tommorow
Simra
22:30
:)
Leo Huang
22:34
yay!
Simra
22:40
Ohh happy early b-day to her!
Omkar Naluvala
22:46
:D
Omkar Naluvala
25:32
CHARGE!!!!!
Zack
26:05
wasn't the beast a prince?
Simra
26:15
yea
Zack
26:22
by a witch?
Leo Huang
26:29
ye
Zack
26:35
:D
Zack
27:04
I love happy endings
Sarah - MADI
27:30
STORYBOARD!
Simra
27:39
luna!
Sarah - MADI
27:41
Who is the story about? A NAME.
Zack
27:47
....
Sarah - MADI
27:52
Where is Luna?
Zack
27:52
in a city
Omkar Naluvala
27:55
the moon
Omkar Naluvala
28:18
no she is the moon
Simra
28:23
friends
Zack
28:23
she wants to go to earth
Leo Huang
28:23
what
Sarah - MADI
28:29
What does Luna want more than anything?
Simra
28:32
friends
Zack
28:32
go to earth
Zack
28:34
go to earth
Omkar Naluvala
28:50
yeah
Simra
28:52
go to earth to make friends because she is lonely
Simra
29:20
yew
Leo Huang
29:20
yes
Simra
29:21
yes
Sarah - MADI
29:33
What is STOPPING Luna?
Zack
29:38
she doesn't know how to go to earth
Omkar Naluvala
29:39
the sun
Omkar Naluvala
29:45
or mars
Simra
29:54
the sun isn't telling her how
Omkar Naluvala
29:56
muahahahahaha
Leo Huang
29:57
she can't survive without something on the moon
Leo Huang
30:05
...
Sarah - MADI
30:12
HOW will she end up getting to Earth?
Leo Huang
30:14
a bubble...
Leo Huang
30:15
idk
Omkar Naluvala
30:16
she asks jupiter
Simra
30:23
yess
Simra
30:34
perfect
Leo Huang
30:52
oh
Simra
31:03
red bubble?
Omkar Naluvala
31:10
yay
Simra
31:26
yes!!
Zack
31:27
they lie to the sun
Omkar Naluvala
31:28
yes!
Leo Huang
31:30
yes
Omkar Naluvala
31:49
earth tells the sun
Sarah - MADI
31:51
What happens when Luna gets to Earth?
Sarah - MADI
31:56
What is the PROBLEM?
Zack
31:58
people thinks shes weird
Leo Huang
32:03
She can't survive for long on the earth
Zack
32:27
and then she realizes that she is better off in space than on earth
Omkar Naluvala
32:41
th sun starts looking for her
Omkar Naluvala
32:57
her skin is silver
Leo Huang
33:04
aaaaAAA
Leo Huang
33:32
she can't TALK
Simra
33:37
only close friends that she was able to make
Omkar Naluvala
34:18
"I know this may be a little hard for you to understand, but I'm the moon."
Omkar Naluvala
34:25
says luna
Zack
34:34
she can make it syb
Simra
34:35
able to reverse gravity
Zack
34:39
able to make it night
Simra
34:45
she can make things fly yes
Omkar Naluvala
35:11
the sun will notice
Leo Huang
35:14
the sun will be alerted
Omkar Naluvala
35:37
yup
Leo Huang
35:41
*confused screaming*
Omkar Naluvala
35:46
yup
Simra
35:55
Scientists would be very confused
Leo Huang
36:02
and THE SUN COMES TOWARD THE EARTH AAAAA
Simra
36:42
the sun travels down to the earth and tries to take the moon back
Leo Huang
36:46
yes
Sarah - MADI
36:50
To make things more dramatic, you need to RAISE THE STAKES
Leo Huang
36:57
and nearly roasts everybody
Zack
37:06
the sun is luna dad
Leo Huang
37:21
yes
Simra
37:35
she has a limited time to convince the sun not to come closer
Leo Huang
37:48
she pushes the sun back
Omkar Naluvala
37:57
she makes friends with mars
Leo Huang
37:59
hrmmm
Omkar Naluvala
38:02
at the end
Leo Huang
38:08
moon landing
Simra
38:18
ohhh yeaa
Omkar Naluvala
38:24
nice!
Leo Huang
38:31
give a business card
Simra
38:44
yea!
Leo Huang
39:52
hrm wouldn't the bubble just evaporate in the atmosphere
Leo Huang
40:00
yea
Leo Huang
40:30
The person on earth keeps trying to capture her
Leo Huang
40:44
to get the p o w e r
Leo Huang
41:17
the plan thwarts due to the sun roasting the president
Leo Huang
41:19
idk
Omkar Naluvala
41:28
that's what I said!!!
Leo Huang
41:33
yes
Omkar Naluvala
41:54
PLOT TWIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Simra
42:24
and a when
Zack
45:50
i saved the chat
Sarah - MADI
46:00
THE BEATS OF A STORY:1) Somebody wants something.2) They make the decision to go and get it.3) It causes problems.4) They have to overcome the problem.5) Only then can we have that ending - the end of our main character’s JOURNEY.
Sarah - MADI
46:19
WHO is the story about? Luna (the moon)
Sarah - MADI
46:21
WHERE is Luna? A city on the moon
Sarah - MADI
46:28
WHEN is the story? 1960s
Sarah - MADI
46:34
WHAT does Luna WANT? To go to earth and make friends because she is lonely.
Sarah - MADI
46:40
What is STOPPING her? She doesn’t know how. The Sun isn’t telling her.
Sarah - MADI
46:50
HOW does she get to Earth? Jupiter gifts her a bubble to travel down in. (The Great Red Spot of Jupiter is actually a UFO bubble)
Sarah - MADI
46:58
Once she gets to Earth, what is her PROBLEM?She can’t survive for long on Earth. (This give us a TIME PRESSURE.)People think she’s weird because she’s different. She eats rocks and her skin is silver.
Sarah - MADI
47:06
How do people REACT when people are different to them?Sometimes they are afraid. Sometimes they are mean.
Sarah - MADI
47:12
How does she try to get what she WANTS?She has a superpower that allows her to move tides. She shows her power to others to try to make friends.
Sarah - MADI
47:19
What is the PROBLEM when she shows people her powers?The Sun notices that she is not there and comes toward the earth.The President wants to capture her and get her power.
Sarah - MADI
47:25
What does this CAUSE? What is our ENDING?The President chases her and tried to capture her. The Sun saves her to bring her back into the sky. The Sun that we THINK is the bad guy actually becomes the savior. She teaches her friends the technology to come to the moon and visit her - they vote the evil president out, and create a spaceship and first moon landing.
Sarah - MADI
48:18
MOST IMPORTANT: How can you get your main character to MAKE DECISIONS?
Sarah - MADI
48:46
We learn about characters through the ACTIONS they take.
Sarah - MADI
49:20
What does Luna WANT? What does she DO to get it?
Simra
49:30
the scientists must have been like where did the great red spot go O.O
Omkar Naluvala
49:38
thank you
Leo Huang
49:47
lol
Zack
49:50
:P
Omkar Naluvala
51:16
we did
Omkar Naluvala
51:25
for the challenge
Omkar Naluvala
51:40
we finished
Simra
52:52
no animation is ok you don't have to write the softwear
Omkar Naluvala
53:02
no
Omkar Naluvala
53:05
it isn't
Leo Huang
53:07
i programmed some animations
Leo Huang
53:11
so that counts
Omkar Naluvala
53:17
ok
Omkar Naluvala
53:30
but we can't make out of animation
Omkar Naluvala
53:39
unless we code the app
Simra
53:45
no not really
Omkar Naluvala
54:04
on Friday we talked about it
Omkar Naluvala
54:37
I thought we could
Omkar Naluvala
54:45
but apparently we can't
Leo Huang
55:54
yeah online stuff is hard
Leo Huang
56:03
yes
Omkar Naluvala
56:05
yeah
Leo Huang
57:18
oh yeah i have a question
Omkar Naluvala
58:04
does it look like something weird is happening to me?
Leo Huang
58:09
bye
Simra
58:11
bye
Leo Huang
58:36
oh
Leo Huang
58:38
ok
Omkar Naluvala
58:44
:D
Leo Huang
58:45
so outline first
Leo Huang
59:08
ok!
Simra
01:00:24
bye!