Patrick
11:30
Hahahhaha
Patrick
11:34
Lol
Luc Travers
16:28
poetryfoundation.org
Patrick
20:38
My parents. Both of them.
lauren
20:39
probbably my dad as well
Audrey Schroder
21:05
My mom and certain dance teachers
lauren
21:35
my grandparents
Eric
21:48
mom and dad
Amiya
23:18
^yeah same
Eric
23:24
also my friend named kaleb
Patrick
23:42
What?
Patrick
23:53
EXCUSE ME?!
Patrick
23:58
???!
Patrick
24:05
Uh
Patrick
24:07
Ok
Patrick
24:14
Whatever. forget it
lauren
24:56
contentment
Andrei
25:02
contentment
Eric
25:05
hmmmmmmm
Amiya
25:08
I mean it really depends but I would say contentment
Audrey Schroder
25:14
contentment for me
Andrei
25:17
you can always help the world as a hobby
Patrick
25:21
Contentment. Although I’m sure we all dream over changing the world in crazy ways.
Sarah D.
25:33
Contentment
Patrick
25:35
Maybe crazy isn’t the best phrasing
Patrick
27:37
Moorhouse?
Patrick
27:40
The one her new family
Patrick
27:43
Ah ok
Eric
28:25
good
lauren
28:32
👍
Amiya
28:34
Good
Patrick
28:37
9/10
Eric
28:38
brb
Audrey Schroder
28:41
good
Patrick
28:44
Or 8.5
Patrick
29:41
7.5/10
Patrick
30:01
FEEDBACK LOOOOOP
Audrey Schroder
30:08
good
lauren
30:08
hmmm
Amiya
30:10
Good
Sarah D.
30:21
good
Patrick
31:58
Eh I guess that might add a 0.5 to it
Patrick
32:07
Maybe even a 1
Patrick
32:45
8.25/10
lauren
32:55
hmmmmmm
Andrei
32:55
what about everything right before the ending
Patrick
32:56
Of course some stuff is missing, but that’s still pretty good
Andrei
33:04
yes
Eric
33:12
this ones pretty good
Audrey Schroder
33:16
I think it fits
lauren
33:21
i feel like part of it was that but part of it was aslo more that he lied to her
Patrick
34:24
Ok I’ve changed it to 7.25/10
Andrei
38:03
and that she wouldn’t ignore her morals
Andrei
39:58
the ending problem repeats itself
lauren
40:03
good
Amiya
40:08
yeah that's good
Audrey Schroder
40:13
good
Patrick
40:14
7/10
Sarah D.
40:19
good
Eric
40:24
good
Amiya
41:06
good!
Audrey Schroder
41:10
good
Sarah D.
41:14
good
lauren
41:20
good
Patrick
43:33
Ok
Amiya
44:32
Can you make it bigger please?
Eric
47:35
strong moral compass is good
Sarah D.
50:11
nope
Amiya
50:13
no
Patrick
50:31
Noppity noppity noppity nope
lauren
51:41
gtg bye