I will be

I don't know

lol

but probably

is this why it's called #surprise 1

good

It could probably be condesned a little

a lil long but was good

it needs periods. its a very long sentence

Prussian

Prussians?

prussians

prussians?

prussians

Prussian offiser

I like this one too

To simplified

maybe a little bit of detail could do, but its pretty good...

yeah I like the short ness

I like it more than the other one

are they trying to escape france or are they just going to a different part of france/

better but a bit too simplyfied

it definetly has a lot of contrast to the first one

The upper-class snobs

Antagonist is the other people

The antigonist is the upper class snob

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anti

lower clas woman vs upper class snobs

Antagonist is the upper class people

upper-class snobs are protagonist and lower-class woman is antagonist?

Accurate summary

It s ok

long

seems more like a summary, but its a good starting point to base a them off of

a little confusing

ok

But maybe include the fact that the Prussian officer wants her to become his mistress

It works, but it could probably be shorter

I like this one.

long

This focuses more on the conflict

two sentences

still a little like a summary tho

More of a summary

the ending?

Just the first sentence would be good

^

French people vs Prussian officer/Prussian people

Pro: boule de suif ant: prusian

The antagonist is the prussian offocer

prussian officer

is the antaganist

I don't think its very clear who the protanist is

Prussian officer is antagonist and Boule de Suif is protagonist

It’s not clear whose the protagonist is unless you’ve read the story

ya

a little short but gets to the point

that one is short and pretty accuate

detail goes a long way though

Doesn’t mention the others

good but it makes it it seem like they are her friend

yeah

I believe the protagonist is patriotism and selflessness, and the antagonist is selfishness.A patriot, surrounded by narcissists, in a German-conquered France is forced to choose between sacrificing herself in an act of altruism or allowing fellow citoyens to be held captive by the enemy in an act of patriotism.

looking back at it I want to redo it

pretty good

Pretty good

i could've stated that the german officer was selfish too

I like it

Pretty good

good

yeah that was good

i don't think she doesn't like them

she wants to be liked by them, and they don't like her

good

Can you say it again

It good

sounds right to me

that's ok but it says the upper class people are her friends

Prussian antigonist

@Jack it says boule de suif and 8 other people

thanks

No more please

idk

he's annoying the snobs?

hmm

idk

Idk

Why is this zoom class surprises #1?

it is annoying the french with their own song?

Maybe annoying Prussians?

is the first line "Love our beautiful fatherland?"

bule de sife

themselves

is he making fun of them for not actually being patriots but being more interested in just themselves?

still not sure

Because he's trying to make the people who forced Boule de Suif to be the Prussian's mistress to feel uncomfortable, as they basically did the opposite of what the song says.

Becuse he is kinda saying how they are coward becuse they forced someone to do what they should have done

hmm

they made boule de suif who was the biggest patriot there do something with their enemy

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